The Sun *Read before The Moon*
He stands alone,wears a mask ofglowering scornto hide thatsoft, glowingcore- his heart. He yearns, he burns and sometimeshides behind the tender cloudswhile theyweep for their friend.When the...
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Spirit,Thanks for reading and replying. .~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Silvia,Glad you like the potrayal of the Sun...I still have to work on getting it a bit longer.. . He is sizzling..! Cool, I'll tell him that ! I hope reading the other poem first and then this,...
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this is very intriguing Neha, love it... gonna "jet" right on over to the moon.. Wonderful job as always. huggs ~Mystic~"All day, staring at the ceiling making friends with shadows on my wall. All...
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Oh this is awesome! Running to the moon (not literally of course)
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Neha!A wonderful way to commence a poem, re; the Sun!! Quote: He stands alone,wears a mask ofglowering scornto hide thatsoft, glowingcore- his heart.this led the way forth with great meter.when read...
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Janel,Thanks for your sweet words of encouragement. I am glad you liked this. ~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Mike,Thank you for your lovely reply...I did see you running to the moon though !~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Sammie,Thank you for your lovely reply. It means alot to me. Hope you read "The Moon" too. .~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Beautifully hot and loving. I'm burning ... pass the lotion. I love you, little sister,Newell***** Come! Join the Body of Christ *****The Kingdom of God blazes light through all spirits in beautiful...
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Thank you Newell. ~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Neha I thought I commented on this when I read it but I don't see it here. This is wonderful and what a pair of poems the sun and the moon Bravo. Deb
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Thanks Deb ! Such a sweet reply... .~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Neha, you are amazing! Some breathlessly beautiful imagery brings the emotions straight into my own heart. Outstanding! Patricia My homepage
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Patricia,Thank you so much for your beautiful reply. It makes me very glad to know that this writing could bring some emotions in your heart...I look up to all the other poets here as an example and...
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Can't wait to read "The Moon" now, this is great, BG
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Thank you Jilly! ~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Thank you GB! Glad you stopped by.~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies proudly!
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Neha,I am wowed by this spectacular work. I'm sorry I've been gone for awhile and couldn't comment. This is awesome!Annette
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